Someone wrote in [personal profile] characterhate 2013-06-03 07:48 pm (UTC)

Re: ESMERALDA

And yet this:

She collapsed sobbing into his arms, shivering with utmost fright and relief. Powerless, she had been absolutely powerless to defend herself against those thieves as they leered at her, and if it hadn't been for the timely arrival of her beloved she knew her purity would have been defiled, forever taken from her.

"Oh, Zuko...!"

He swept her close, covering her face with tender kisses and stroking her silky mane of ebon hair.

"It's all right now, Mai," he whispered, "I'll never allow anyone to harm you again."


Gets only a minor scolding for "mild OOCness" simply because Mai/Zuko is canon.

Your bias is showing, Zacky-boy. Just admit you want to bone Essie and are buttering her up so she'll let you.

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